The feedback we received for our film pitch are as following:
1) To redo the production schedule as it is quite spread out where the actors will have to dress up twice- the production schedule has now been updated
2) Have more detail on other characters in the story board during the second half and to also show the audience how the girl is moving from the country side to the city- a new story board has been uploaded
3) To add into the pitch who the actors are.
4) To be clear as to who's house we will be filming at- we will film at Amy's house.
5) To have more detail on the soundtrack by noting down the sound names etc
6) Add more detail to the risk assessment especially for scenes where the bus is involved.
We did also receive lots of positive feedback:
1) The fully developed animatic was liked as the sound track was effective and the plot was well planned out. It gave a clear vision of the film we will make.
2) The props, locations and make up were very detailed
3) Clear vision of the bold and fun titles with examples given
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