While I was blading the shots for smoother action scenes and adding the titles on, Tahsin gave me some constructive criticism
1) She thought that the font was a bit too big and that it takes too much attention away from the actual action behind the titles - I have now made the font smaller
2) She liked the outfits of all the characters- specifically where there is a close up of the goth's necklace and makeup
3) She found that the scene of the main girl throwing her clothes onto the floor did not make sense as the order in which she throws them and where they land do not match up - Daniel has now changed this
4) The colours and movement of the titles really suited a high school movie as they look fun.
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