Group 34
Wednesday, 4 March 2015
Dan's feedback on rough cut
1) Get rid of the scene of the close up of Amy's feet as it's too dark
2) Why does Ana get to the college first?
3) Clock time and phone time doesn't make sense. It isn't clear that she decided to ignore her alarm
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